I was learning to use show not tell in my writing and show not tell writing is that you have to show how you feel so you don't just go like this'I am happy.'You go like this 'I was smiling the whole time we were walking.' And that way they have to infer. I found it hard because I kept getting confused on how to show my feeling in the writing;)
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I think your 'show' examples give an excellent description of how you were feeling. I can picture it in my mind. Great writing Hank!
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